In the fading windows to your soul
I can see that you just let me go
Your eyes they lie but I know you have tried
And put up with my weakness and sad pathetic lies
Please don't misunderstand, I'd never do you any wrong
But I'm lost and still seeking a place to belong
With the chill of your good bye kiss
I feel surrounded by all this coldness
Your body talk hushed, God I feel crushed
But there is still so many parts that remain untouched
Please don't misunderstand, I'd never do you any harm
But I need the storm before i calm
With the final flick of your good bye wave
I want to cry but i have to be brave
The door closed
There's so much I need but I can't be exposed
Please don't misunderstand, I'm going to miss you like mad
But I need to be happy before I feel sad
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Anonymouspoet:
ReplyDeleteYou have asked for constructive crtisism; This is interesting, but it's ammature,"Lacking complete growth" I do not mean that in a hurtful way, I'm only telling you what I think,I also think that the words are beautiful, just need to be re-arranged.
Perhaps that is a reason there has not been any comments, maybe this will encourege other.
Thank you so much, I do love your work.