For my love is constant, I always say
And when my feelings are at bay
I feel your love to my dismay
I'll never reach you but I hope one day
And I hope fate plays it's part
For I can never find my heart
The one you took from me from the very start
Will you love me even though we're apart?
The girls crave to be at my side
But my true feelings I can never hide
Even though we're apart, I'll turn the tide
Your songs of hope will be my guide
Just wait for me my long lost princess
like I've waited for you ever since
Though I'm a commoner in your dynasty
I will still love you through eternity
And even if it takes a thousand years
Or even if I fill an ocean of tears
Or whatever the cost or the price
For me, with you is paradise
Thursday, May 6, 2010
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I like this very, very much. I am myself an amateur poet, and can say with felling, that you have talent.
ReplyDeleteAlthough you make me jealous with your rhyming skills.
Not many people can do a love poem that is not cheesy, and rings true at the same time,
Keep up the good work.
OUTSTANDING, I believe that you hit high notes in this work.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up so we can all benefit.
And Thank You.